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Hi Marie, you know, as I told you, I broke up with my girlfriend. I know that I'll forget her and make up my mind, but it's not too easy for me. I think taking a trip helps me to arrange my mind. Anyway, I make my english name, Hugh.

Hi there!

You did a good job writing this - it is simple and concise. You are right. It does not do to dwell on the past and forget about your future. You are still young so you can still meet A LOT of girls.  I like your name, it is very unique. It sounds like the name of one of my favorite actors-- Hugh Jackman.  These are some corrections:

T. Marie 

Hi Marie, you know, as I told you, I broke up with my girlfriend.

>>Correct

I know that I'll forget her and make up my mind, but it's not too easy for me.

>>Correct

I think taking a trip helps me to arrange my mind.

>> I think taking a trip will help me clear my mind.
Anyway, I make my english name, Hugh.

>> Anyway, I made my English name, it is Hugh.