8.11 Homework(1)

When I lived in my hometown,I haven't seen any celebrities.There are not many opportunities to see a celebrity because my hometown is a district far from Seoul,the central city of my country.However,since I started to live in Seoul,I've seen celebrities several times.Most of them are entertainers-famous MC,actor,actress,comedian,etc.The first experience was when I participated in recording a TV show as an audience.I was excited to see famous people in person who I could see only on the TV screen.Finally I sat very near to famous MCs and comedians.They are almost same as I expected.But it was a good experience to watch them during break times.Then,I found that someone known as a talkative entertainer was quite serious,in reality.I was surprised a liitle bit and thought that the image of the person on TV screen is not the whole thing.Since then,I always keep in mind that we should not judge the person by an exaggerated appearance to interest the public watching them through the screen.

Good evening [이름]^^Thanks for your composition. I really want to meet Lee Min Ho in person. Do you like him too? Who is your favorite Korean actor? You did great again with your essay. Keep it up! Work on your sentence patterns. You can do it. Teacher Nina   When I lived in my hometown,I haven\'t seen any celebrities. >> Correct There are not many opportunities to see a celebrity because my hometown is a district far from Seoul,the central city of my country. >> There few opportunities to see a celebrity because my hometown is a district far from Seoul, the central city of my country. >> OR: I don\'t have a lot of opportunities to see a celebrity in my hometown because it is far from Seoul. However,since I started to live in Seoul,I\'ve seen celebrities several times. >> Correct >> OR: However, since I started living in Seoul, I saw a lot of celebrities several times. Most of them are entertainers-famous MC,actor,actress,comedian,etc. >> Correct The first experience was when I participated in recording a TV show as an audience. >> Correct >> OR; The first experiene was when I was an audience in a taping show. I was excited to see famous people in person who I could see only on the TV screen. >> I was excited to see famous people in person who I only see on TV. Finally I sat very near to famous MCs and comedians. >> Correct >> OR: I had the chance to sit near the famous MCs and comedians. They are almost same as I expected. >> Correct But it was a good experience to watch them during break times. >> Correct Then,I found that someone known as a talkative entertainer was quite serious,in reality. >> Correct >> OR: I found out that a talktaive entertainer is quite serious in person. I was surprised a liitle bit and thought that the image of the person on TV screen is not the whole thing. >> Correct Since then,I always keep in mind that we should not judge the person by an exaggerated appearance to interest the public watching them through the screen. >> Since then,I always keep in mind that we should not judge the person by an exaggerated appearance to get the interest of the public to watch them.