8.11 Homework(2)

(continued essay of 8.11) By the way, I also met a celebrity who was the guest in that show. Because I looked up to him, I asked him his autograph. He willingly autographed with my name and a nice message. After this experience, I've run into celebrities but I could not get their autographs. I had to be satisfied with taking pictures of them in the crowds. Actually, in most of situations, I was usually sandwiched between too many people. + Sometimes I imagine how it would like that I'm a celebrity. I think becoming a famous person would be nice but definitely there would be a dark side of it. We can know the obvious fact through many cases in reality. If one craves for becoming known, it's kind of price to pay to be a public figure. I always appreciate you correcting my essays~! :)

Hi there [이름]! Oh! It\'s my pleasure to help you out. ^^ I know that you are doing your best and you are determined to improve. Keep up that great attitude of yours. Way to go! Always express yourself and don\'t forget the basics. Talk to you soon. Good night. Please go over the correctiosn I provided for you. Teacher Nina   (continued essay of 8.11) >> continuation of my essay last 8.11. >> OR: continuation of my essay last August 11. By the way, I also met a celebrity who was the guest in that show. >> Correct! Because I looked up to him, I asked him his autograph. >> Because I looked up to him, I asked for his autograph. He willingly autographed with my name and a nice message. >> Did you mean: He willingly autographed it with my name a nice message. After this experience, I\'ve run into celebrities but I could not get their autographs. >> Correct! I had to be satisfied with taking pictures of them in the crowds. >> I had to be satisfied in taking pictures of them in the crowd. Actually, in most of situations, I was usually sandwiched between too many people. >> Correct! >> OR: Actually, I was usually in the sandwiched between a lot of people. + Sometimes I imagine how it would like that I\'m a celebrity. >> I sometimes imagne how it would be like if I am a celebrity. I think becoming a famous person would be nice but definitely there would be a dark side of it. >> Correct! >> OR: I think becoming a famous person would be nice but definitely there would be bad things about it too. We can know the obvious fact through many cases in reality. >> Did you mean: We will be able to know it through many cases in reality. >> OR: We will be able to know the fact through many situations in reality. If one craves for becoming known, it\'s kind of price to pay to be a public figure. >> Correct! I always appreciate you correcting my essays~! :) >> I always appreciate you for correcting my esssays.