8.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
What is your opinion about women in the militry?
I always admire the women in the military because even the men don't like a military life, but they do work to serve their country.
Anyway, I think they look like that it would be wonderful to have a job as a serviceperson.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
I also salute those brave women who serve in the military even if they know that it\'s a tough job. Anyway, thank you for sharing your insight. Have a good day!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is your opinion about women in the militry?I always admire the women in the military because even the men don\'t like a military life, but they do work to serve their country.
>> I always admire women in the military because even if men don\'t like the military life, they work to serve their country. Anyway, I think they look like that it would be wonderful to have a job as a serviceperson.>> Anyway, I think that it would be wonderful to work as a public servant.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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