8.11 Homework

2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! What is your opinion about women in the militry? I always admire the women in the military because even the men don't like a military life, but they do work to serve their country. Anyway, I think they look like that it would be wonderful to have a job as a serviceperson. Thank you!

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Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I also salute those brave women who serve in the military even if they know that it\'s a tough job. Anyway, thank you for sharing your insight. Have a good day!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is your opinion about women in the militry?I always admire the women in the military because even the men don\'t like a military life, but they do work to serve their country. >> I always admire women in the military because even if men don\'t like the military life, they work to serve their country. Anyway, I think they look like that it would be wonderful to have a job as a serviceperson.>> Anyway, I think that it would be wonderful to work as a public servant.Thank you! >> Correct.

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