8-11 homework

2016-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hi jane. how are you going? It's very tired thursday right? I always think that thank you for your effort because you looks sometimes little bit hard because of me when I don't do prepare. so I will be more try to do the prepare!! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Fill in the blank with a metaphor and explain your answer in two to three sentences. Living is marathon because we have to run utill when it finish but they have important timing so we have to control pace. we have to take a rest sometimes. if you always do your best, you will be fed up. I think both have a lot of similar point.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for your composition! I like your answer to our homework. Living indeed is a marathon because it has to keep going. I hope you won\'t get tired nor fed up with it.^^ T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane. >> Correct How are you going? >> How are you doing? It\'s very tired thursday right? >> It\'s a tiring Thursday, right? I always think that thank you for your effort because you looks sometimes little bit hard because of me when I don\'t do prepare. >> I am always thankful for your effort because sometimes it seems like you are having a hard time because of me when I\'m not prepared. so I will be more try to do the prepare!! >> So I will do my best to prepare in advance.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Fill in the blank with a metaphor and explain your answer in two to three sentences. >> CorrectLiving is marathon because we have to run utill when it finish but they have important timing so we have to control pace. >> Living is a marathon because we have to keep running until we reach the finish line. However, we also need to have a proper timing, so we have to control our pace. we have to take a rest sometimes. >> We have to take some rest sometimes. If you always do your best, you will be fed up. >> Correct I think both have a lot of similar point. >> I think both have a lot of similar points.

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