8.13 Homework

Hi there! Good morning! In different places over the world, the high volume of traffic is a big problem. What do you think are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? The reason why traffic problem is a big issue over the world these days is because of our greed. I am sure that if we pursue more conveniences, the traffic problem will be getting worse. I think this is all of our own doing. We must lie on the bed that we have made. I think this is the only solution. Thank you!

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion. You are right, I think we should all be responsible to solve our issue about traffic problem. Anyway, please review my corrections. See you!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.In different places over the world, the high volume of traffic is a big problem. What do you think are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?The reason why traffic problem is a big issue over the world these days is because of our greed. >> The reason why traffic problem is a big issue all over the world these days is because of our greed. I am sure that if we pursue more conveniences, the traffic problem will be getting worse. >> I am sure that if we pursue more conveniences, the traffic problem will get worse. I think this is all of our own doing. >> I think this is because of our wrongdoing. We must lie on the bed that we have made. >> Correct. I think this is the only solution. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.