8/13 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the most difficult thing about learning English?
The most difficult thing when learning English is that, I cannot write or speak right away because of grammar and expressions.
I want to convey exactly what I mean without being distorted. However, when talking, I cannot find proper words or expressions.
Furthermore, I want to (convey,deliver)speak humbly and without straightforward.
//I don\'t know that verbs(convey,deliver) are also fits.
Lastly, I troubled with saying American sentence structure which is different from Korean sentence structure, so I want to change my Korean sentence structure to American sentence structure.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Emma. Thank you for doing your homework and I appreciate your participation during our class yesterday. ~ teacher Jane ^^
Here are the corrections for your homework:
The most difficult thing when learning English is that, I cannot write or speak right away because of grammar and expressions.
>>> The most difficult thing when learning English is that I cannot write or speak right away because I am conscious of my grammar and the correct expressions to use.
I want to convey exactly what I mean without being distorted.
>>> I want to convey exactly what I mean without being misunderstood.
However, when talking, I cannot find proper words or expressions.
>>> However, when talking, I cannot find the proper words or expressions.
Furthermore, I want to (convey,deliver)speak humbly and without straightforward.
>>> Furthermore, I want to convey or deliver my thoughts and speak humbly without being straightforward.
//I don\'t know that verbs(convey,deliver) are also fits.
>>> I also don\'t know the appropriate verbs that could convey and deliver my exact thoughts.
Lastly, I troubled with saying American sentence structure which is different from Korean sentence structure, so I want to change my Korean sentence structure to American sentence structure.
>>> Lastly, I am concerned when using the American sentence structure which is different from the Korean sentence structure so I want to change the way I construct sentences to the American sentence structure.
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