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2014-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I had the best things that I went to the Gapyung valley with my family. And then my family and some of relative visited my older sister's house in Munkyong. The house have built lately. I was excited and felt enviable. The house is huge and has nice scenery around the house.

강사 첨삭

Great Thursday morning Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for sending your composition.
I am happy to know that something good happened to you and your family.

I hope that you will also have a good one this holiday.
See you later!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

I had the best things that I went to the Gapyung valley with my family.

>> I had the best thing when I went to Gapyung valley with my family.
And then my family and some of relative visited my older sister\'s house in Munkyong.

>> And then my family and some of our relatives visited my older sister\'s house in Munkyong.
The house have built lately.

>> The house is newly built.
I was excited and felt enviable.

>> I was excited and I felt inevitable.
The house is huge and has nice scenery around the house.

>> The house is huge and the scenery around is nice.

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