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2020-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Please talk about the best book that you\'ve read. The best book I\'ve read is Harry Potter series by J.K.Rowling. I read the series when I was 9. At first I wasn\'t very interested in the book because I wasn\'t into fantasy then. I love the characters in the book and how the author continues the story. The three main characters each have a flaw which there friends can complete. I like how there were not perfect like other hero books. This book helped me with going through a hard time. When I was distressed, I read the books to escape from reality. The world the author created made me fall into it in a moment. I love this series because even though it\'s not philosophical like Shakespeare or Hemingway, it gave peace to my mind and I could relax from reading this.

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Hi [이름]. Awesome work. Thanks.
-T. Gabby :)
The best book I\'ve read is Harry Potter series by J.K.Rowling. 
>> Correct.
I read the series when I was 9. 
>> Correct.
At first I wasn\'t very interested in the book because I wasn\'t into fantasy then. 
>> Correct.
I love the characters in the book and how the author continues the story. 
>> I love the characters in the book and how the author creates the story. 
The three main characters each have a flaw which there friends can complete. 
>> The three main characters have their own flaws which their friends can complete. 
I like how there were not perfect like other hero books. 
>> I like how imperfect they are like the other hero books. 
This book helped me with going through a hard time. 
>> Correct.
When I was distressed, I read the books to escape from reality. 
>> Correct.
The world the author created made me fall into it in a moment. 
>> Correct.
I love this series because even though it\'s not philosophical like Shakespeare or Hemingway, it gave peace to my mind and I could relax from reading this.
>> I love this series because even though it\'s not philosophical like Shakespeare or Hemingway, it gave peace of my mind and I could relax from reading this.

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