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학생이 쓴 원문
What is the sport the you want to learn?
I\'d like to learn baseball. While I was living in Kansas, U.S.A., our baseball team had won the major league. I got interested in baseball from then. I also watched a baseball game with my own eye, and the thrill went through me. I loved cheering with other audiences as if we have met before, which we did not. The rules of baseball also sounded interesting to me. It felt like an elaborate machine that everything has to fit in order to work. Even though I don\'t really like to play sports, I would like to learn baseball.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T.Gabby :)
I\'d like to learn baseball.
>> Correct.
While I was living in Kansas, U.S.A., our baseball team had won the major league.
>> Correct.
I got interested in baseball from then.
>> I got interested in baseball since then.
I also watched a baseball game with my own eye, and the thrill went through me.
>> Correct.
I loved cheering with other audiences as if we have met before, which we did not.
>> Correct.
The rules of baseball also sounded interesting to me.
>> Correct.
It felt like an elaborate machine that everything has to fit in order to work.
>> Correct.
Even though I don\'t really like to play sports, I would like to learn baseball.
>> Correct.
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