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What are the disadvantages of online classroom learning?
First, it\'s hard to pay attention to the class. Students watch the class that has been recorded when listening to online class. It is hard to pay attention because there are no interesting things except lessons. When we are taking classes offline, teachers add a by-talk to keep student\'s focus. However, when watching online class, there are no fun sayings. and so it is a bit boring. Second, in online class, students cannot interact with the teachers. We go to school not only to study subjects, but also to learn attitude to our lives. Without any interaction with teachers and friends, we cannot learn the values towards one another.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T. Gabby :)
First, it\'s hard to pay attention to the class.
>> First, it\'s hard to pay attention in class.
Students watch the class that has been recorded when listening to online class.
>> Correct.
It is hard to pay attention because there are no interesting things except lessons.
>> It is hard to pay attention because there are no interesting things except for the lessons.
When we are taking classes offline, teachers add a by-talk to keep student\'s focus.
>> Correct.
However, when watching online class, there are no fun sayings. and so it is a bit boring.
>> Correct.
Second, in online class, students cannot interact with the teachers.
>> Second, in an online class, students cannot interact with the teachers.
We go to school not only to study subjects, but also to learn attitude to our lives.
>> We go to school not only to study subjects, but also to learn attitude for our lives.
Without any interaction with teachers and friends, we cannot learn the values towards one another.
>> Correct.
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