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Please share about your vegetarian diet.
I became a vegetarian when I learned how animals were treated in an unethical way. When I first started vegetarian diet I didn\'t eat anything related to animals\' lives. I didn\'t eat meat, seafood, milk, and eggs. However, as I went to school from time to time, I realized that it was almost impossible to not eat any one of these. Sometimes, there were nothing to eat even if I ate milk and eggs. So I almost gave up on vegetarian diet. And when I started again, I have begun to only not eat meat. I still don\'t enjoy eating seafood, milk, and eggs, but I do eat those when there are nothing to eat.
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Hi [이름]. Great job. :)
-T.Gabby :)
I became a vegetarian when I learned how animals were treated in an unethical way.
>> Correct.
When I first started vegetarian diet I didn\'t eat anything related to animals\' lives.
>> Correct.
I didn\'t eat meat, seafood, milk, and eggs.
>> Correct.
However, as I went to school from time to time, I realized that it was almost impossible to not eat any one of these.
>> Correct.
Sometimes, there were nothing to eat even if I ate milk and eggs.
>> Sometimes, there were nothing to eat even if I drink milk and eat eggs.
So I almost gave up on vegetarian diet.
>> So I almost gave up on my vegetarian diet.
And when I started again, I have begun to only not eat meat.
>> Correct.
I still don\'t enjoy eating seafood, milk, and eggs, but I do eat those when there are nothing to eat.
>> Correct.
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