8/14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In no less than 5 sentences,answer the following question:
Who is your favorite super hero?
<My answer>
My favorite super hero is Spider man.
I like him because, his suit is awesame!
Second, he is brave.
Finally, he is yonger than other heros.
So, my favorite super hero is Spider man.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing who your favorite super hero is. :)
It\'s always good to have someone to admire especially if this someone
has influenced you in a good way. :)
Keep motivated:)
Teacher Glenda
In no less than 5 sentences,answer the following question:
Who is your favorite super hero?
< My answer>
My favorite super hero is Spider man.
>> Correct
I like him because, his suit is awesame!(awesome)
>> Correct
Second, he is brave.
>> Correct
Finally, he is yonger than other heros.(heroes)
>> Correct
So, my favorite super hero is Spider man.
>> Correct
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