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2011-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hi Marie. In Korea, there is three days,"cho(1st)-bok","jung(2nd)-bok" and "mal(3rd)-bok", that day, we eat the health food like "samgyetang;chicken soup with ginseng" or roasted eel for passing the summer healthy and making up for losing energy-because of hot day. 8/13-last saturday, it is the day,"mal-bok", so I I visited my grandmather's house and I ate a lot of roasted eels. Anyway,tomorrow morning, I have to register for fall courses, so I postpone our class next day. I'm sorry.

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Hello Hyunwoo! Thank you for writing this wonderful composition. :D I only saw the samgyetang in pictures and I think it looks sumptuous! I'd like to try it someday. ^^ I hope you get to eat lots of samgyetang to regain your lost energy this summer!  Take care and talk to you tomorrow! CIAO! ~T.Marie~ Hi Marie. >> correct  In Korea, there is three days,"cho(1st)-bok","jung(2nd)-bok" and "mal(3rd)-bok", >> In Korea, there are three days called  "cho (1st) -bok","jung (2nd) -bok" and "mal (3rd) -bok". that day, we eat the health food like "samgyetang;chicken soup with ginseng" or roasted eel for passing the summer healthy and making up for losing energy-because of hot day.  >> During these days, we eat healthy food like samgyetang, which is chicken soup with ginseng, or roasted eel to stay healthy all throughout the summer and to make up for our lost energy due to the hot weather. 8/13-last saturday, it is the day,"mal-bok", so I I visited my grandmather's house and I ate a lot of roasted eels.>> Last Saturday, August 13, was the "mal-bok" so I visited my grandmother's house and I ate a lot of roasted eels. Anyway,tomorrow morning, I have to register for fall courses, so I postpone our class next day. >> Anyway, tomorrow morning, I have to register for my fall courses so I will postpone our class the next day.  I'm sorry. >> correct **It's alright. Don't worry about it. ^^

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