8/16 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What is the best piece of advice you have received from a family member?]
When I broke up with my ex-boyfriend, I have received a lot of advice and help from my family.
It was my first failure in my life.
I can not understand now, but at that time, I was so sad and regret everything.
Maybe I thought that love is all of me.
I had drunk a lot and crying every day for a few days.
My mother and younger sister have surprised me.
They worried about me and told me about so many things in life.
At that time, I realized that family is the most important thing in life.
The family loves me no matter what.
I realized that quite late because I was 25 at that time.
I think love and separation is a very important experience and girls and boys should feel that in their early life.
It makes us realize a lot of things and grow up to be adult.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^^
Thank you for sharing a part of your life and what you have experienced in the past. Painful experiences make us grow and appreciate the people who love us! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
When I broke up with my ex-boyfriend, I have received a lot of advice and help from my family.
>>CORRECT
It was my first failure in my life.
It was my first failure in my life.
>>CORRECT
I can not understand now, but at that time, I was so sad and regret everything.
I can not understand now, but at that time, I was so sad and regret everything.
>>I can not understand now, but at that time, I was so sad and regretted everything.
Maybe I thought that love is all of me.
Maybe I thought that love is all of me.
>>Maybe I thought then that love was everything. (I hope I got this one right. ^ ^)
I had drunk a lot and crying every day for a few days.
I had drunk a lot and crying every day for a few days.
>>I had drunk a lot and cried everyday for a few days.
My mother and younger sister have surprised me. >>My mother and younger sister had surprised me.
They worried about me and told me about so many things in life.
They worried about me and told me about so many things in life.
>>CORRECT
At that time, I realized that family is the most important thing in life.
At that time, I realized that family is the most important thing in life.
>>CORRECT
The family loves me no matter what.
The family loves me no matter what.
>>CORRECT
I realized that quite late because I was 25 at that time.
I realized that quite late because I was 25 at that time.
>>CORRECT
I think love and separation is a very important experience and girls and boys should feel that in their early life.
I think love and separation is a very important experience and girls and boys should feel that in their early life.
>>I think love and separation are very important experiences and girls and boys should feel that in their early life.
It makes us realize a lot of things and grow up to be adult.
It makes us realize a lot of things and grow up to be adult.
>>It makes us realize a lot of things and grow up to be mature adults.
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