8. 17 Homework

2018-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: Can leadership skills be taught? I think so. I'm an only child in my familiy so I don't have any brothers or sisters. So I don't have any experience to lead someone in my home. My parents don't give me much strength so I don't have much experience to depend on somesone. So I have tendency not to lead or depend on someone. I think the role in familiy is very important to learn the leadership skills.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ~~

Have a great weekend ahead!

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- Blair

I think so. I\'m an only child in my familiy so I don\'t have any brothers or sisters. So I don\'t have any experience to lead someone in my home. My parents don\'t give me much strength so I don\'t have much experience to depend on somesone. So I have tendency not to lead or depend on someone. I think the role in familiy is very important to learn the leadership skills.

I think so. I\'m an only child in my family so I don\'t have any siblings. As a result, I don\'t have any experiences to lead someone at home. My parents don\'t give me much strength so I don\'t have much experience to be a dependent on someone. So I have a tendency not to lead or depend on someone. I think the role in the family is very important to learn the leadership skills.

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