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Originally I don\'t belive that first impression was correct,
>> Originally, I don\'t believe that first impression is correct.
So I met my husband and We had a romantic relationship for two years.
>> So when I met my husband, we had a romantic relationship for two years.
The result I was merried to him.
>> The result was, I\'m married to him.
Oh my god!!! I found that first impression was correct.
>> I found that first impression is correct.
The reson why that I lived with him together, more and more
>> That\'s the why I want to live with together more and more.
I found it which I felt first impression to him.
>> I found that it was my first impression to him.
So these day I was change to my think that first impression is very important!
>> So these days, I changed my mind that first impression is very important.
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