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2013-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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In addition, the blistering cracks were observed 70 in number of the east face, 54 in number of the west face, 22 in number of the south face, and 66 in number of the north face, and the total number is 212. The blistering crack index by applying formula proposed by Jo and Lee (2012) was calculated based on the total length of blistering crack and area of each member. The equation for the blistering crack index is as follows: As a result of calculating the crack index values, the east face showed average of 2.39, west face 2.01, south face 1.33, north face 2.42. Generally, although the south face has the highest blistering rate, it showed the lowest blistering crack index values because it has many types of enclosed blistering which isn’t developed a blistering crack compared to other directions.

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Hi there, Sir [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Here are the corrections. Take care and have a fine day! T. JanE ^^ In addition, the blistering cracks were observed 70 in number of the east face, 54 in number of the west face, 22 in number of the south face, and 66 in number of the north face, and the total number is 212. >> Correct The blistering crack index by applying formula proposed by Jo and Lee (2012) was calculated based on the total length of blistering crack and area of each member. >> The blistering crack index was calculated based on the total length of the blistering crack and the area of each member by applying the formula proposed by Jo and Lee (2012). The equation for the blistering crack index is as follows:>> Correct As a result of calculating the crack index values, the east face showed an average of 2.39, west face 2.01, south face 1.33, north face 2.42. >> Correct Generally, although the south face has the highest blistering rate, it showed the lowest blistering crack index values because it has many types of enclosed blistering which isn\'t developed a blistering crack compared to other directions. >> Generally, although the south face has the highest blistering rate, it showed the lowest blistering crack index values because it has many types of enclosed blistering which didn\'t develope a blistering crack compared to other directions.

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