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Therefore, detection sensitivity according to the various blistering shapes should be analyzed for rock specimens showing the thickness of diverse blistering layer and enclosed style blistering.
Thus, infrared thermography has some improvement points to utilize in the field of cultural heritage. However, detection and evaluation techniques of blistering zone are actively applicable for non-destructive diagnosis and conservation project of stone monument which are conducted all over the world. In addition, the quantitative modeling for blistering zone can be employed to modern architectural heritage, which is composed of concrete material, and wooden cultural heritage, which has serious damage by insects, as well as stone monument. Particularly, the modeling will improve the reliability of deterioration map through mapping for blistering zone since most deterioration map has overlooked to mark blistering zones. Using the research findings, prediction of scaling possibility and prevention of additional deterioration will be possible.
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Therefore, detection sensitivity according to the various blistering shapes should be analyzed for rock specimens showing the thickness of diverse blistering layer and enclosed style blistering.
>> Correct
Thus, infrared thermography has some improvement points to utilize in the field of cultural heritage.
>> Correct
However, detection and evaluation techniques of blistering zone are actively applicable for non-destructive diagnosis and conservation project of stone monument which are conducted all over the world.
>> Correct
In addition, the quantitative modeling for blistering zone can be employed to modern architectural heritage, which is composed of concrete material, and wooden cultural heritage, which has serious damage by insects, as well as stone monument.>> In addition, the quantitative modeling for blistering zone can be employed to modern architectural heritage, which is composed of concrete material, and wooden cultural heritage, which were severely damaged by insects, as well as the stone monument.
Particularly, the modeling will improve the reliability of deterioration map through mapping for blistering zone since most deterioration map has overlooked to mark blistering zones.
>> Particularly, the modeling will improve the reliability of deterioration map through mapping for blistering zone since most deterioration maps have overlooked to mark the blistering zones.
Using the research findings, prediction of scaling possibility and prevention of additional deterioration will be possible.
>> Correct
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