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In yesterday, my mother came to my home. My birthday is comming up soon, she bought me shoes and bossam(a boiled pork). She made some side dishes for me while I worked. She brought my dog with her, I was very happy because I miss my doggy very much. I want to keep my dog in my house, but Jjanga(her name is Jjang) doesn't want to live here. This home is strange to her, and she like a familiar home and living into many people. At first, I brought to here her. When I worked, she was left alone. She was lonely and fear very much. SO I was sorry to Jjang. THEN I sent her to my mother's house back.

Hi Claire!! Thank you for sending your own composition. So far, you did well in telling a story about your dog and your upcoming birthday. And I want to greet you in advance HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY CLAIRE!!! I will give you a BIG BIG Birthday HUG as your present from me ^^. Just stay happy this weekend. Talk to you soon then.   In yesterday, my mother came to my home. >> Yesterday, my mother came to my home. >> Yesterday, my mother visited me at home.My birthday is comming up soon, she bought me shoes and bossam(a boiled pork). >> My birthday is coming up soon, she bought me some pair of shoes and a bossam.She made some side dishes for me while I worked. >> CORRECTShe brought my dog with her, I was very happy because I miss my doggy very much. >> CORRECTI want to keep my dog in my house, but Jjanga(her name is Jjang) doesn't want to live here. >> CORRECTThis home is strange to her, and she like a familiar home and living into many people. >> This home is strange to her and she like to be in a familiar home and be around with many people.At first, I brought to here her. >> At first, I brought her here.When I worked, she was left alone. >> CORRECT She was lonely and fear very much. >> She was lonely and so afraid.SO I was sorry to Jjang. >> So I feel sorry for JjangTHEN I sent her to my mother's house back. >> Then I sent her back to my mother's house.