8/18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) Which form of transport do you like taking most?
A) I prefer to drive myself because it\'s faster and I don’t like to wait, but it’s expensive to maintain. Sometimes, if I’m in a hurry, I take a taxi, but I usually take the bus or subway. In Korea, we have a transfer system. If you use the bus or subway, transfers within the same area are free. I think some countries have the same system too.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]. This is an excellent piece of writing; very clear, well-structured, and easy to follow. You explained your transportation choices logically, and I can really feel the balance you’re making between convenience, cost, and efficiency. Mentioning the Korean transfer system was also a great detail because it shows cultural context, and it makes your writing more informative and interesting. I didn’t need to make any corrections this time, which means you’re already expressing yourself in a natural and grammatically correct way. That’s a big achievement! Keep writing with this clarity and confidence. It shows how much progress you’ve made.
~ T. Lia
I prefer to drive myself because it\'s faster and I don’t like to wait, but it’s expensive to maintain.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes, if I’m in a hurry, I take a taxi, but I usually take the bus or subway.
>> CORRECT
In Korea, we have a transfer system.
>> CORRECT
If you use the bus or subway, transfers within the same area are free.
>> CORRECT
I think some countries have the same system too.
>> CORRECT
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