8.18 Homework

2015-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! How can you improve the public transportation system in your country? The subway is comfortable and fast than other vehicles. The high speed rail is convenient, too. I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and kind service is also very important. As far as I know, we need to invest for a network of public roads to improve the public transportation. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this. Please go over my corrections. Enjoy the rest of your day. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct! How can you improve the public transportation system in your country?The subway is comfortable and fast than other vehicles. >> The subway is more comfortable and faster than other vehicles. The high speed rail is convenient, too. >> Correct!  I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and kind service is also very important. >> I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and a good service is also very important. As far as I know, we need to invest for a network of public roads to improve the public transportation.>> As far as I know, we need to invest for network of public roads to improve the public transportation.Thank you! >> Correct! 

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