8.18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
How can you improve the public transportation system in your country?
The subway is comfortable and fast than other vehicles. The high speed rail is convenient, too. I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and kind service is also very important. As far as I know, we need to invest for a network of public roads to improve the public transportation.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this. Please go over my corrections. Enjoy the rest of your day.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct! How can you improve the public transportation system in your country?The subway is comfortable and fast than other vehicles.
>> The subway is more comfortable and faster than other vehicles.
The high speed rail is convenient, too.
>> Correct!
I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and kind service is also very important.
>> I think all of them should be operated harmoniously, and a good service is also very important.
As far as I know, we need to invest for a network of public roads to improve the public transportation.>> As far as I know, we need to invest for network of public roads to improve the public transportation.Thank you!
>> Correct!
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