8/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What is the biggest accomplishment in your personal life?]
I think my biggest accomplishment in my personal life is getting married to my husband.
Before I got married, I thought the biggest task in life is marriage.
But, I realized that marriage is relatively smaller than I expected.
The bigger event and choice is waiting for me after getting married.
So, I think marriage is a turning point or starting point to the next step in my life.
I am very settled and feel warm with my husband.
It makes me more concentrate to work also.
So I think everything about me starts at home.
Peace of mind is very important to live life.
This is my thought about the biggest accomplishment until now.
I am still young, so maybe the depth or degrees of accomplishment will be changed.
I want to feel and realize a lot of things in life.
And I want to keel at a book in my old age.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I\'m happy to know that you feel accomplished with your marriage. I hope that your married life will continue to prosper and grow more! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think my biggest accomplishment in my personal life is getting married to my husband.
>>CORRECT
Before I got married, I thought the biggest task in life is marriage.
Before I got married, I thought the biggest task in life is marriage.
>>CORRECT
But, I realized that marriage is relatively smaller than I expected.
But, I realized that marriage is relatively smaller than I expected.
>>CORRECT
The bigger event and choice is waiting for me after getting married.
The bigger event and choice is waiting for me after getting married.
>>CORRECT
So, I think marriage is a turning point or starting point to the next step in my life.
So, I think marriage is a turning point or starting point to the next step in my life.
>>CORRECT
I am very settled and feel warm with my husband.
I am very settled and feel warm with my husband.
>>CORRECT
It makes me more concentrate to work also.
It makes me more concentrate to work also.
>>It also makes me focus with my work more.
So I think everything about me starts at home.
So I think everything about me starts at home.
>>CORRECT
Peace of mind is very important to live life.
Peace of mind is very important to live life.
>>CORRECT
This is my thought about the biggest accomplishment until now.
This is my thought about the biggest accomplishment until now.
>>CORRECT
I am still young, so maybe the depth or degrees of accomplishment will be changed.
I am still young, so maybe the depth or degrees of accomplishment will be changed.
>>CORRECT
I want to feel and realize a lot of things in life.
I want to feel and realize a lot of things in life.
>>CORRECT
And I want to keel at a book in my old age.
And I want to keel at a book in my old age.
>>And I want to write a book in my old age. (I\'m not sure if I got this right, but the only idiom I know about using the word \"keel\" is \"on an even keel\", which means to find a state of balance. ^ ^ )
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