8/20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) Do you prefer mornings or evenings?
A) It\'s a different to weekday or weekend
I prefer evenings after work to mornings because i have go to work on weekdays.
But i prefer mornings on weekends
Because I can enjoy my holiday
강사 첨삭
Hello Seung[이름], you did a good job explaining the difference between your weekday and weekend routines. I can really understand your preference. After long workdays, evenings feel more relaxing, while weekends are perfect for enjoying peaceful mornings. That makes your answer very relatable. I only adjusted small grammar points, like fixing “i have go” to “I have to go” and making the sentences flow more smoothly. Your ideas are clear and thoughtful, and with a little polishing, your writing sounds very natural. Keep sharing your personal routines this way. It makes your writing lively and easy to connect with.
~ T. Lia
It\'s a different to weekday or weekend
>> It’s different on weekdays and weekends.
I prefer evenings after work to mornings because i have go to work on weekdays.
>> I prefer evenings after work to mornings because I have to go to work on weekdays.
But i prefer mornings on weekends
>> But I prefer mornings on weekends.
Because I can enjoy my holiday
>> Because I can enjoy my holidays.
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