8. 20 Homework

2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: What factors influence a career choice? Money, the level of hardness, aptitude, welfare in the company can influence a career choice. In my case, at first, I just chose nursing because of getting a job quickly but after I quit the Nursing University, I chose education as my major because of the level of hardness and aptitude. To me, more important ranking was these 2.

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- Blair

Money, the level of hardness, aptitude, welfare in the company can influence a career choice. In my case, at first, I just chose nursing because of getting a job quickly but after I quit the Nursing University, I chose education as my major because of the level of hardness and aptitude. To me, more important ranking was these 2.

First, Money, the level of hardness, aptitude, welfare in the company can influence a career choice. In my case, at first, I just chose nursing because of the easy employment but after I quit the Nursing University, I chose education as my major because of the level of hardness and aptitude. To me, the most important / common factor is the latter.

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