8/20 homework
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This is the same homework theme with yesterday Jedah.
So, I want to say another important accomplishment in my life today.
I got a Ph.D. about four years ago.
After graduation from university, the state of me is absolutely changed.
When I was a student, I had a teacher and my mistake or unsufficient knowledge was accepted because I was a student.
However, I became independent with a Ph.D. thesis.
There is no teacher anymore, just boss.
It was so scared at the beginning time.
But, I keep going one step by step.
Whenever I thought I accomplish the biggest challenge ever, another bigger challenge is waiting for me.
Last year, I wrote the biggest paper with one professor who I respect so much about the perspective of my field.
It was the biggest challenge in my life and took a very long time, finally, I finished well.
But, if I though now, it was not so big relatively compare with the work now.
I think this is life.
We are growing up every day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort. ^ ^
Yes, it\'s quite a similar theme as that with yesterday\'s question. Yesterday was your personal accomplishment, today is about your professional accomplishment.
And, you have greatly shared your thoughts on this one! ^ ^ Well done! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
So, I want to say another important accomplishment in my life today.
>>CORRECT or
>>I want to share another accomplishment in my life today.
I got a Ph.D. about four years ago.
I got a Ph.D. about four years ago.
>>CORRECT
After graduation from university, the state of me is absolutely changed.
After graduation from university, the state of me is absolutely changed.
>>After graduating from the university, I had a changed of views and perception.
When I was a student, I had a teacher and my mistake or unsufficient knowledge was accepted because I was a student.
When I was a student, I had a teacher and my mistake or unsufficient knowledge was accepted because I was a student.
>>When I was a student, I had a teacher and my mistake or insufficient knowledge was accepted because I was a student.
However, I became independent with a Ph.D. thesis.
However, I became independent with a Ph.D. thesis.
>>CORRECT
There is no teacher anymore, just boss.
There is no teacher anymore, just boss.
>>There are no teachers anymore to guide you, just your boss or superior.
It was so scared at the beginning time.
It was so scared at the beginning time.
>>It was scary at the beginning.
But, I keep going one step by step.
But, I keep going one step by step.
>>But I kept on going one step at a time.
Whenever I thought I accomplish the biggest challenge ever, another bigger challenge is waiting for me.
Whenever I thought I accomplish the biggest challenge ever, another bigger challenge is waiting for me.
>>Whenever I thought I accomplished the biggest challenge ever, another bigger challenge is waiting for me. (another bigger challenge awaits.)
Last year, I wrote the biggest paper with one professor who I respect so much about the perspective of my field.
Last year, I wrote the biggest paper with one professor who I respect so much about the perspective of my field.
>>CORRECT
It was the biggest challenge in my life and took a very long time, finally, I finished well.
It was the biggest challenge in my life and took a very long time, finally, I finished well.
>>CORRECT
But, if I though now, it was not so big relatively compare with the work now.
But, if I though now, it was not so big relatively compare with the work now.
>>But, thinking about it now, it was not so relatively big compared with the work I have now.
I think this is life.
I think this is life.
>>CORRECT
We are growing up every day.
We are growing up every day.
>>CORRECT
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