8/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What makes you angriest, the most frustrated, the most annoyed and why?]
Nowadays, when I should do working what I don\'t want to do, I am very angry and annoyed.
For example, I am writing and reviewing a lot of papers nowadays because I need high performance to get a job as much as possible.
Sometimes colleges are very nice people, but someones are very rude and want to submit the paper with very small work.
I think collaboration or co-work is very difficult to satisfying everyone.
Anyone doesn\'t want to biggest work in the collaboration.
They want to get performance with just small work.
And this tendency becomes very serious between boss and lower-grade personnel.
I don\'t like this.
But, we can not say honestly all in Korea society.
This is the biggest reason to make me angry and frustrated now.
Nevertheless, I should keep going and going to a better future.
So, nowadays, I have interests in meditation and ways to relieve stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework and the time and effort you have put into it. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
It\'s hard dealing with people, especially if it has something to do with work. You really need to extend your patience and understanding. Of course you wouldn\'t like to have grudges or misunderstanding with them; that\'s why being honest and straightforward to them is not an option, or they may take things against you. It\'s good to know that you are finding ways to relieve your stress. I believe meditation and exercise is the best! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
Nowadays, when I should do working what I don\'t want to do, I am very angry and annoyed.
>>Nowadays, when I should be working but I don\'t feel like, I am very angry and annoyed.
For example, I am writing and reviewing a lot of papers nowadays because I need high performance to get a job as much as possible.
For example, I am writing and reviewing a lot of papers nowadays because I need high performance to get a job as much as possible.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes colleges are very nice people, but someones are very rude and want to submit the paper with very small work.
Sometimes colleges are very nice people, but someones are very rude and want to submit the paper with very small work.
>>Some colleges are very nice, but there are some who are rude and would submit their paper with very limited effort.
I think collaboration or co-work is very difficult to satisfying everyone.
I think collaboration or co-work is very difficult to satisfying everyone.
>>I think collaboration or working with others is very difficult to satisfy everyone.
Anyone doesn\'t want to biggest work in the collaboration.
Anyone doesn\'t want to biggest work in the collaboration.
>>Nobody would like to take the bigger responsibility in a group work.
They want to get performance with just small work.
They want to get performance with just small work.
>>They want to be recognized but they only want to work a little.
And this tendency becomes very serious between boss and lower-grade personnel.
And this tendency becomes very serious between boss and lower-grade personnel.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t like this.
I don\'t like this.
>>CORRECT
But, we can not say honestly all in Korea society.
But, we can not say honestly all in Korea society.
>>But, in Korean society, it\'s hard to be straightforward to people.
This is the biggest reason to make me angry and frustrated now.
This is the biggest reason to make me angry and frustrated now.
>>This is the biggest reason why I\'m angry and frustrated now.
Nevertheless, I should keep going and going to a better future.
>>Nevertheless, I should keep on striving for a better future.
So, nowadays, I have interests in meditation and ways to relieve stress.
>>So, nowadays, I have interest in meditation and ways to relieve stress.
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