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1. remaining
2. certification exam
3. prepare for
4. on weekdays
5. unexpected
1. I took a first step which is writting exam and the next remaining exam is a drawing exam. I need enough time for next exam and i am considering whether i prepare for thoroughly.
2. I took a certification exam called \"colorist\". I prepared for a month and then finally i got passed.
3.I was prepared for about one year for getting a job. It take pretty long time but it is impotant to go to the stable company with good ambience.
4.I take an academy on weekdays. I take a class which is Web and App UI UX Design and coding for realizing design for 8 hours.
5.Tickets get even more expensive during peak seasons. You should buy a ticket in advance in case someing unexpected happened.
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Hi there!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. I took a first step which is writting exam and the next remaining exam is a drawing exam. I need enough time for next exam and i am considering whether i prepare for thoroughly.
>> I took the first step, which is a written exam and the remaining one is a drawing test. I need enough time for my next exam and I am considering whether I prepared for it thoroughly.
2. I took a certification exam called \"colorist\". I prepared for a month and then finally i got passed.
>> I took a certification exam called \"colorist\". I prepared for a month and then I finally passed.
3. I was prepared for about one year for getting a job. It take pretty long time but it is impotant to go to the stable company with good ambience.
>> I prepared for about a year for my job hunting. It took a pretty long time but it is important to go to a stable company with good ambience.
4. I take an academy on weekdays. I take a class which is Web and App UI UX Design and coding for realizing design for 8 hours.
>> I go to an academy on weekdays. I take an 8-hour class, which consists of Web and App UI UX Design and coding.
5. Tickets get even more expensive during peak seasons. You should buy a ticket in advance in case someing unexpected happened.
>> Tickets get even more expensive during peak seasons. You should buy a ticket in advance in case something unexpected happens.
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