8/23 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What have you been procrastinating lately and why?]
I thought you are God because you know very well about me nowadays.
In this week, I should finish the revision for one of my paper.
It is for the study that I did in Kyoto for about two years ago.
I want to finish as soon as possible.
But, my colleagues are very passionate men, so I have a lot of comments and question about the draft now.
Something is simple things to revise, but many things make me think and suffer.
So, I think I am procrastinating now.
Although the priority is maybe highest, I and working for different things.
I think it becomes from the pressure to be finished very well.
I hear about this yesterday.
Sometimes the thinking that I want to finish properly not perfect is better than the thinking that I want to be the best.
Maybe I think it\'s good advice for me now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for devoting a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
So you think I\'m \"God\"? ^^ I think the questions I have asked you were just mere coincidence! ^ ^
Most people\'s problem is procrastinating. I, myself has been procrastinating many things. I know I must do it, but I don\'t know why I still don\'t do it. Let\'s say keeping ourselves healthy. We know it\'s important to keep our bodies well and healthy, but we put off exercising and going to the gym. Is this how we are wired? I don\'t know. But one thing my parents taught me, they always say; \"if you can do it, do it now!\" ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I thought you are God because you know very well about me nowadays.
>>CORRECT or
>>Sometimes I think you are God because it seems that you know a lot about me these days.
In this week, I should finish the revision for one of my paper.
In this week, I should finish the revision for one of my paper.
>>I should finish the revision for one of my paper this week.
It is for the study that I did in Kyoto for about two years ago.
It is for the study that I did in Kyoto for about two years ago.
>>CORRECT
I want to finish as soon as possible.
I want to finish as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT
But, my colleagues are very passionate men, so I have a lot of comments and question about the draft now.
But, my colleagues are very passionate men, so I have a lot of comments and question about the draft now.
>>But, my colleagues are very passionate men, so I have a lot of comments and questions about the draft now.
Something is simple things to revise, but many things make me think and suffer.
Something is simple things to revise, but many things make me think and suffer.
>>Some parts are easy to revise, but many parts make me think a lot and it\'s making me suffer.
So, I think I am procrastinating now.
So, I think I am procrastinating now.
>>CORRECT
Although the priority is maybe highest, I and working for different things.
Although the priority is maybe highest, I and working for different things.
>>Although it should be a top priority, but I\'m working on different things instead.
I think it becomes from the pressure to be finished very well.
I think it becomes from the pressure to be finished very well.
>>I think it comes from the thought and pressure that it should and must be done really well.
I hear about this yesterday.
I hear about this yesterday.
>>I heard about this yesterday.
Sometimes the thinking that I want to finish properly not perfect is better than the thinking that I want to be the best.
Sometimes the thinking that I want to finish properly not perfect is better than the thinking that I want to be the best.
>>Sometimes the thought of finishing something properly but not so perfect is better than thinking to be the best.
Maybe I think it\'s good advice for me now.
Maybe I think it\'s good advice for me now.
>>Maybe I think it\'s a good advice for me now.
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