8/23 : My diary (I went to school.)

2021-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is Monday. Today, I went to my school. We start a new season. AM.8:27. I went to my school with my best friends and he said \"hello,good to see you.\" and I said \"your welcome\". We get many talks for going to school. We arrived to my class. They(my class mates) welcomed us. I said \"hello!, How are you?\",\"What did you do in your vacation?\" and she said \"I broke up my fiancee.\". I said \"oh really?\" and \"why You broke up him\" and she said \"oh, It\'s was sad. but age gap was big.\" ,,,,,, PM.12:20. I had lunch with my best friends. I think, \'To have lunch with my best friends is delicious and fun!\' PM.3:00. We finished the first day of a new school season. I said \"oh... good bye bro.\" and he said \"you too. I hope to eat some noodle with you. ha ha ha.\" and I said \"okay see you tomorrow!\" and we said goodbye. then My first day of the new school season finished too. But It is just start and I will study hard! ha ha ha ha......

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

We start a new season.
>> We started a new season. 

AM.8:27
>>8:27 AM 

\"I broke up my fiancee.\"
>>I broke up with my boyfriend. 


\"why You broke up him\"
>> Why did you guys broke up?\"

PM.12:20
>> 12:20 PM 

PM.3:00
>>3:00 PM 

I hope to eat some noodle with you
>>I hope to eat some noodles with you

But It is just start
>> But It is just the start

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