8/24 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you usually make reservations?
I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurant.
Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Dr. [이름]!
You have very organized and systematic ways on reservations for your accomodations and other needs. As a doctor, you have to attend to so many conferences as well as travel and tours both for work and pleasure. Consequently, looking for the cheapest deals is a way to maximize your budget. Online booking definitely made is faster and more convenient. In addition, we can compare options via our phones. Thanks to COVID-19, these are possible.
Looking at your homework answer, you made so many correct sentences. The suggestions I have places are some insertions of prepostitions as well as correct capitalization and subject-verb agreement. Read though and analyze them well. Thank you for your diligence and hard work!
Catch you later!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: I often need to make reservations for flights, accommodation, and restaurants.
Whenever I make reservations, I usually use online reservation system.
>> Correct!
Or: Whenever I make reservations, I usually use an online reservation system.
When I go to trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodation.
>> Correct!
Or: When I go on a trip abroad, I need to reserve the flights and accommodations.
I used to compare several websites which is the cheapest, and there is many price comparison sites that people could easily find the cost-effective services.
>> I used to compare several websites on which is the cheapest, and there are many price comparison sites that people could easily find cost-effective services.
Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use internet website or reservation applications.
>> Sometimes, I make reservations for the fancy and famous restaurants, then I also use the Internet websites or reservation applications.
It is difficult to contact with the manager of restaurants, when the restaurant is crowded.
>> It is difficult to contact the manager of restaurants when the restaurant is crowded.
But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
>> But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait for reaching the manager of restaurants.
Or: But, if I use online, I don’t need to wait to reach the manager of restaurants.
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