8.25 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
This is yesterday's homework.
Do you think punishment is a good way to teach people a lesson?
I don't think like that. Punishment is not good way to teach people in any way. I think even though students misbehave something, the teachers will not allowed to punish them phisically at all.
If they punish students, kids will end up losing their potential creativities.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
WOW! You also finished your homework yesterday. You are really diligent! Thank you for your time and effort. Anyway, I like your opinion regarding our topic for today. I support your answer that punishment is not a good way to teach people a lesson.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.This is yesterday\'s homework.>> Correct.Do you think punishment is a good way to teach people a lesson?I don\'t think like that.
>> Correct.
Punishment is not good way to teach people in any way.
>> Punishment in any way is not a good way to teach people a lesson.
I think even though students misbehave something, the teachers will not allowed to punish them phisically at all.
>> I think that even though students misbehave, teachers are not allowed to punish them physically.If they punish students, kids will end up losing their potential creativities.>> If they punish students, they will end up losing their creative potential.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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