8/25: My Money~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
8/25. I planed to buy some object for needing.
4:30PM. I went \'The Papel market\' and I bought some pencils.
I bought some eraser too.
Next, I went to \'dream dipo\' and i bought a flying disk.
PM.5:00. I want to buy more! but My learning institute start 5:00 PM. finally, I went there late....
After My learning institute, I went to \'daiso\' and I bought gloves.
7:20 PM. I backed home. I Paid 27,000won.
but I got a \'motemote\' note, two pencils, some erasers, sticky notes, a circle ruler and a flying disk.
I felt, It is tired. but It was Great work out!
Where is going my money~~~~~
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I planed to buy some object for needing.
>> I plan to buy some object that I need.
I went \'The Papel market\' and I bought some pencils.
>>I went to \'The Papel market\' and I bought some pencils.
I backed home
>> I came back home.
I felt, It is tired.
>> I feel tired.
Where is going my money
>>Where is my money going?
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