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Basically, robots can substitute humans\' physical labor.
When we work, we need to take a rest and sleep.
But, robots don\'t need that kind of wasted time.
They can work always.
If we can see just the positive side, we will be liberated from the labor.
However, on the negative side, we should use our brains more to survive in the world.
I know it is not easy because it means we have to learn or study more improved things.
Everyone doesn\'t need to be a programmer or expert in AI.
But, at least, we have to control or maintain the intelligent system.
I can\'t imagine our future, sometimes I am also afraid that intelligence will control humans.
However, we already live in the AI era.
We can\'t go back to the past, anyone doesn\'t want to live without a computer.
The most important thing is that we should find and think ourselves what we can do to live well.
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>> Correct
When we work, we need to take a rest and sleep.
When we work, we need to take a rest and sleep.
>> Correct
But, robots don\'t need that kind of wasted time.
But, robots don\'t need that kind of wasted time.
>> Correct
They can work always.
They can work always.
>> They can always work.
OR: Robots can always work.
If we can see just the positive side, we will be liberated from the labor.
OR: Robots can always work.
If we can see just the positive side, we will be liberated from the labor.
>> If we will look at the positive side, we will be liberated from the labor.
However, on the negative side, we should use our brains more to survive in the world.
However, on the negative side, we should use our brains more to survive in the world.
>>Correct
I know it is not easy because it means we have to learn or study more improved things.
>>Correct
Everyone doesn\'t need to be a programmer or expert in AI.
Everyone doesn\'t need to be a programmer or expert in AI.
>>Correct
But, at least, we have to control or maintain the intelligent system.
But, at least, we have to control or maintain the intelligent system.
>>Correct
I can\'t imagine our future, sometimes I am also afraid that intelligence will control humans.
I can\'t imagine our future, sometimes I am also afraid that intelligence will control humans.
>> I can\'t imagine our future, and sometimes I am also afraid that intelligence will take over the humans.
However, we already live in the AI era.
However, we already live in the AI era.
>>Correct
We can\'t go back to the past, anyone doesn\'t want to live without a computer.
We can\'t go back to the past, anyone doesn\'t want to live without a computer.
>>Correct
The most important thing is that we should find and think ourselves what we can do to live well.
The most important thing is that we should find and think ourselves what we can do to live well.
>> The most important thing is that we should find and think of ourselves on what we can do to live well.
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