8/26 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you have any unpleasant/ bad experience in any of your reservations before?
I have made so many reservations for hotels, restaurants, and flights until now.
I haven\'t experienced any inconvenience and unpleasant feeling most of time, because all the hotel receptionists and managers of restaurants were very kind to me and respond fast.
But I remember a memory about my hotel room.
About 3 years ago, I reserved a hotel for 2days at Pusan.
After I checked in and entered the room, I was very surprised about room condition.
The room was uncleaned as if someone was already use the room.
I complained to the hotel receptionist about the room condition.
The hotel receptionist apologized to me for inconvenience, and rapidly changed the upgraded room.
Also, she gave an extra service to enjoy the deserts.
First I felt uncomfortable about the room, but thanks to the excellent attitude of the hotel receptionist, I was very impressed.
강사 첨삭
Good day once again, Dr. [이름]!
Having a hassle-free reservation saves one time and effort. I am glad to hear that your reservations are a breeze. If there may be some problems, we can stay composed and argue our concerns in a kind way. In your case, you have been well compensated when you were given some upgrades. I think that was due to your communication skills. Hence, our language plays a big role in resolving issues.
Here on your howework answer, your ideas are presented very systematically. You had very smooth transitions and appropriate set of vocabulary to describe your experience of the hotel room. Now, the use of the determiners \'the\' and \'a\' are sometimes very tricky, so use them to describe a noun correctly.
Overall, you have done a wonderful job in writing your homework answer! The more details the better. Excellent job!
See you again in class.
-T. Donna~
I have made so many reservations for hotels, restaurants, and flights until now.
>> Correct!
I haven\'t experienced any inconvenience and unpleasant feeling most of time, because all the hotel receptionists and managers of restaurants were very kind to me and respond fast.
>> I haven\'t experienced any inconvenience and unpleasant feeling most of the time, because all the hotel receptionists and managers of restaurants were very kind to me and respond fast.
But I remember a memory about my hotel room.
>> Correct!
Or: However, I remember a memory about my hotel room.
About 3 years ago, I reserved a hotel for 2days at Pusan.
>> Correct!
Or: About three years ago, I reserved a hotel for two days at Busan.
After I checked in and entered the room, I was very surprised about room condition.
>> Correct!
The room was uncleaned as if someone was already use the room.
>> The room was uncleaned as if someone has already used the room.
I complained to the hotel receptionist about the room condition.
>> Correct!
The hotel receptionist apologized to me for inconvenience, and rapidly changed the upgraded room.
>> The hotel receptionist apologized to me for the inconvenience and rapidly changed it to an upgraded room.
Also, she gave an extra service to enjoy the deserts.
>> Correct!
Or: dessert
First I felt uncomfortable about the room, but thanks to the excellent attitude of the hotel receptionist, I was very impressed.
>> At first, I felt uncomfortable about the room, but thanks to the excellent attitude of the hotel receptionist, I was very impressed.
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