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My first favorite song is Somehow by Day6. It’s a rock music. I love the melody because it makes me feel overwhelmed. And I can hear the rich band sound.
Second is Cosmic by Red Velvet. It’s an aerial and mysterious music. When I listen to that song, it reminds me of a fairy tale scene.
Last one is Payphone by Maroon5. In this music, Adam Levine’s voice is so attractive. And this song gets me pumped up. It’s easy to sing along even the lyrics is English.
강사 첨삭
Hi,
I love your choice of music. The song sounds really good. ^^
-Teacher Ash
My first favorite song is Somehow by Day6.
>> My first favorite song is \"Somehow\" by Day6.
It’s a rock music.
>>CORRECT
I love the melody because it makes me feel overwhelmed.
>> CORRECT
And I can hear the rich band sound.
>> I can hear the rich melody of the song.
Second is Cosmic by Red Velvet.
>>Second is \"Cosmic\" by Red Velvet.
It’s an aerial and mysterious music.
>>CORRECT
When I listen to that song, it reminds me of a fairy tale scene.
>> CORRECT
Last one is Payphone by Maroon5.
>> Last one is \"Payphone\" by Maroon 5.
In this music, Adam Levine’s voice is so attractive.
>> In this song, Adam Levine’s voice is so attractive.
And this song gets me pumped up.
>> This song gets me pumped up.
It’s easy to sing along even the lyrics is English.
>>It’s easy to sing along even if the lyrics is in English.
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