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학생이 쓴 원문
[If your body could talk, what would it tell you?]
If my body could talk to me, she will tell me please do not eat any foods including alcohol at the late night and work out.
My weight is steadily increasing from my graduate course along with master and Ph.D. life.
When I was in undergraduate school, I moved a lot.
However, almost I was in the chair with my small desk in the laboratory to write the paper and study.
I made me the present.
I thought my attitude also changed because I often feel tired.
I know I need to exercise, but it is difficult to practice.
Anyway, If my body can talk to me, it will be really funny.
When I have junk food or drink alcohol a lot, she will say stop it if you want to live as long as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for devoting a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. I guess there is only one thing our bodies would say to us: \"STOP eating unhealthy, take care of me please!\" ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If my body could talk to me, she will tell me please do not eat any foods including alcohol at the late night and work out.
>>If my body could talk to me, she will tell me not to eat a lot of food and drink alcohol late at night and it would also tell me to work out.
My weight is steadily increasing from my graduate course along with master and Ph.D. life.
My weight is steadily increasing from my graduate course along with master and Ph.D. life.
>>My weight has been steadily increasing since I was taking my graduate course until my Masters and Ph.D.
When I was in undergraduate school, I moved a lot.
When I was in undergraduate school, I moved a lot.
>>When I was in undergraduate school, I used to be physically active.
However, almost I was in the chair with my small desk in the laboratory to write the paper and study.
However, almost I was in the chair with my small desk in the laboratory to write the paper and study.
>>However, almost everyday I sit on a chair with my small desk in the laboratory writing paper and studying.
I made me the present.
I made me the present.
>>I made the \"present me.\"
I thought my attitude also changed because I often feel tired.
I thought my attitude also changed because I often feel tired.
>>CORRECT
I know I need to exercise, but it is difficult to practice.
I know I need to exercise, but it is difficult to practice.
>>I know I need to exercise, but it is difficult to start.
Anyway, If my body can talk to me, it will be really funny.
Anyway, If my body can talk to me, it will be really funny.
>>CORRECT
When I have junk food or drink alcohol a lot, she will say stop it if you want to live as long as possible.
When I have junk food or drink alcohol a lot, she will say stop it if you want to live as long as possible.
>>CORRECT
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