8.27 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your honesty in answering the question. I must agree with you that money is important if we want to have a prosperous life. But money is not everything. Anyway, good job for today!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
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To what degree do you think money is power?
Of course, it\'s necessary to have enough money for our abundant life.
>> Of course, it\'s necessary to have enough money to have an abundant life.
\"Money is power\".
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Yes, I am sure that it is very true on some occasions.
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But I think it is important not only to have enough money but also keep our faith.
>> But I think it is not only important to have enough money but also to keep our faith.
So I would like to put value on money about 60 percent.
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Thank you!
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