8. 27 Homework

2018-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: ~~ Is adoption common in your country? What do you think of adoption? Adoption in South Korea isn't common like America. I think to bring a child into an adult is very difficult without love. People who love a child who don't have any common things are so respectable. I can't do that. I don't know I can bring even my own children well in the future.

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- Blair

Adoption in South Korea isn\'t common like America. I think to bring a child into an adult is very difficult without love. People who love a child who don\'t have any common things are so respectable. I can\'t do that. I don\'t know I can bring even my own children well in the future.

Adoption in South Korea isn\'t common like in America. I think to bring a child into an adult is very difficult without love. People who love a child as their own even if they are not the biological parents are so respectable. I can\'t do that. I don\'t even know if I can bring my own children well in the future.

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