8.27 homework!
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8/27
Creative writing:
What is one thing that you want tell yourself right now. Why?
I want to teleport ability because I work on far away in office.
So If I can to teleport, I easy move on working and maybe I can efficiently work to do.
Now I need only one thing that it is teleporting. Although, It is amazing ability but I can\'t have it.ㅜㅜ
강사 첨삭
Creative writing:
What is one thing that you want tell yourself right now. Why?
I want to teleport ability because I work on far away in office.
>> I want to have the ability to teleport because my office is a bit far.
So If I can to teleport, I easy move on working and maybe I can efficiently work to do.
>> So if I can teleport, I can easily move at work and I can do my job efficiently.
Now I need only one thing that it is teleporting. Although, It is amazing ability but I can\'t have it.ㅜㅜ
>> If only I can have this ability, it would be amazing but I can\'t have it.
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