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[If failure was impossible, what would you try that you\'ve never done before?]
It was not a failure, but if I remember my high school days now, I regret many things.
I was a modest girl having a lot of worries.
I don\'t know why but at that time, I was afraid to grow up and enter the university.
There is a social grade about the university.
Many adults ranked the university.
Maybe it was heavy pressure on me.
So, I thought many things during studying, how can I enter the better university? what will happen if I can\'t go to university? what is my real dream?
If I think about the period now, it was better to do something for me such as exercise or making hobby.
It would have helped me a lot.
Fortunately, I entered the university where I wanted to go and become a researcher who I wanted to be.
However, I think that if I did active somethings instead of anxiety, many things about my personal characteristics could be changed positively.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for devoting a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts here. ^ ^ It\'s well thought of and organized. But, I think you have misunderstood the question. It means that, if you are to do something, and you are sure that you are not going to fail, what would you like to do? ^ ^ (Example: Math has always been my fear ever since I was in grade school, but since I\'m sure that I\'m not going to fail because failure is impossible I would like to take up Accountancy, Engineering or any major that has a lot of Math. Because I\'m sure I\'m going to pass it! ^ ^ )
-Teacher Jedah
It was not a failure, but if I remember my high school days now, I regret many things.
>>CORRECT
I was a modest girl having a lot of worries.
I was a modest girl having a lot of worries.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t know why but at that time, I was afraid to grow up and enter the university.
I don\'t know why but at that time, I was afraid to grow up and enter the university.
>>CORRECT
There is a social grade about the university.
There is a social grade about the university.
>>CORRECT
Many adults ranked the university.
Many adults ranked the university.
>>CORRECT
Maybe it was heavy pressure on me.
Maybe it was heavy pressure on me.
>>Maybe it was a lot of pressure for me.
So, I thought many things during studying, how can I enter the better university?
So, I thought many things during studying, how can I enter the better university?
>>So I thought a lot of things while I was studying; like, how can I enter a good university?
what will happen if I can\'t go to university?
>>What will happen if I may not go/enter a university?
what is my real dream?
>>CORRECT
If I think about the period now, it was better to do something for me such as exercise or making hobby.
If I think about the period now, it was better to do something for me such as exercise or making hobby.
>>If I think about that period now, it could have been better if I did something for me such as exercise or making a hobby.
It would have helped me a lot.
It would have helped me a lot.
>>CORRECT
Fortunately, I entered the university where I wanted to go and become a researcher who I wanted to be.
Fortunately, I entered the university where I wanted to go and become a researcher who I wanted to be.
>>Fortunately, I entered the university where I wanted to go and became a researcher who I wanted to be.
However, I think that if I did active somethings instead of anxiety, many things about my personal characteristics could be changed positively.
However, I think that if I did active somethings instead of anxiety, many things about my personal characteristics could be changed positively.
>>However, if I thought of doing other activities to relieve my anxiety, many things about my personal characteristics may have changed positively.
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