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1. travel time
2. rush hour
3. caught in the (rush hour)
4. stuck in the traffic
5. entry to
1. Summer is peak season as a travel time because many people have a plan to go summer hoilday in order to avoid the heat.
2. After 6 p.m is rush hour. It means the time that workers are off and causes traffic jam.
3. The time that the academy finishes is always caught in the rush hour. Although the bus gets stuck in the traffic every time, to think about it, i can watch the view of city more than before.
4. I got stuck in the heavy traffic for half an hour.
5. I applied for the entry to the event about an animation movie of Pixar titled\"Wonder Park\". I can get two tickets if i wins and i had to write the reason why i want to watch that movie and then posted on a web page.
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1. travel time
2. rush hour
3. caught in the (rush hour)
4. stuck in the traffic
5. entry to
1. Summer is peak season as a travel time because many people have a plan to go summer hoilday in order to avoid the heat.
>> Summer is a peak season for travelling because many people have plans to go on a holiday in order to avoid the heat.
2. After 6 p.m is rush hour. It means the time that workers are off and causes traffic jam.
>> 6 p.m is rush hour, which means this is the time that workers are get off work and causes traffic jam.
3. The time that the academy finishes is always caught in the rush hour. Although the bus gets stuck in the traffic every time, to think about it, i can watch the view of city more than before.
>> Whenever I finish my academy classes, I always get caught in the evening rush hour.
Although the bus gets stuck in the traffic all the time, in retrospect, I can watch the view of the city more than before.
4. I got stuck in the heavy traffic for half an hour.
>> CORRECT~~
5. I applied for the entry to the event about an animation movie of Pixar titled\"Wonder Park\". I can get two tickets if i wins and i had to write the reason why i want to watch that movie and then posted on a web page.
>> I joined an event for the movie premiere of Pixar\'s Wonder Park. I can get two tickets if I win. I had to post on the web page the reason why I want to watch that movie.
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