8. 28 Homework

2018-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question briefly: Are there gender role biased issues in your country? What are they? In Korea, thesedays, It's very hot issue about the gender role in a family. In the past, It's very natural that men make money and women do housework. But many women work for their career today but they also have to do more housework than men. Some women say that marriage is good for only men. I think housework is for both and It must be samely divided.

강사 첨삭

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I hope you are having a great time today.

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- Blair

In Korea, thesedays, It\'s very hot issue about the gender role in a family. In the past, It\'s very natural that men make money and women do housework. But many women work for their career today but they also have to do more housework than men. Some women say that marriage is good for only men. I think housework is for both and It must be samely divided.

These days, the gender role in a family is a very hot issue in Korea. In the past, It\'s very natural for men to make money and women do the housework. But many women work for their career today but they also have to do more housework than men. Some women say that marriage is only good for men. I personally think that house works should be done by both genders and must be divided fairly.

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