8/28 homework
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[Where would you rather go for a vacation; to the mountains or to the beach?]
I prefer to go to the beach for vacation.
I like both of them, but I don\'t like to climb the mountains.
And there are a lot of insects in the mountains, so I don\'t want to go there in summer.
I want to swim at the beach with my husband and drink a frozen beer after swimming.
It will be the best way to spend a summer vacation.
If I can have a vacation in spring or autumn, I want to go to the mountainside.
There are many flowers and I can feel the wind.
One of my bucket lists is camping in the mountainside.
It\'s very popular in the familys having children.
If I will go to the mountain and set up a tent and cook dinner with my husband, it will make me very happy.
There are many beautiful mountains in Jeju island.
So, I want to do before the end of this year.
I am happy with my imagination.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
It\'s so nice of you to share this wonderful thought. I could imagine it too! How wonderful would it be especially spent with loved ones. For me, going to the beach in summer would be best and going to the mountainside would be best on a cool bright evening! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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I like both of them, but I don\'t like to climb the mountains.
I like both of them, but I don\'t like to climb the mountains.
>>CORRECT
And there are a lot of insects in the mountains, so I don\'t want to go there in summer.
And there are a lot of insects in the mountains, so I don\'t want to go there in summer.
>>CORRECT
I want to swim at the beach with my husband and drink a frozen beer after swimming.
I want to swim at the beach with my husband and drink a frozen beer after swimming.
>>I want to swim at the beach with my husband and drink a bottle of frozen beer after swimming.
It will be the best way to spend a summer vacation.
It will be the best way to spend a summer vacation.
>>CORRECT
If I can have a vacation in spring or autumn, I want to go to the mountainside.
If I can have a vacation in spring or autumn, I want to go to the mountainside.
>>CORRECT
There are many flowers and I can feel the wind.
There are many flowers and I can feel the wind.
>>CORRECT
One of my bucket lists is camping in the mountainside.
One of my bucket lists is camping in the mountainside.
>>CORRECT
It\'s very popular in the familys having children.
It\'s very popular in the familys having children.
>>It\'s very popular among families especially with children.
If I will go to the mountain and set up a tent and cook dinner with my husband, it will make me very happy.
If I will go to the mountain and set up a tent and cook dinner with my husband, it will make me very happy.
>>CORRECT
There are many beautiful mountains in Jeju island.
There are many beautiful mountains in Jeju island.
>>CORRECT
So, I want to do before the end of this year.
So, I want to do before the end of this year.
>>CORRECT
I am happy with my imagination.
I am happy with my imagination.
>>CORRECT
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