8/28 writing homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for taking the time to accomplish your homework. I appreciate it! I like your thoughts on this one. A superhero doesn\'t have to be a fictional character but if we look around, there are a lot of ordinary people who do extraordinary things, they can be called heroes too!^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

In my mind, a superhero is like iron man in a movie.

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I think most important think to be a superhero is braininess and consideration for human.

>> I think the most important thing about being a superhero is intelligence and being considerate to others. 
He or she can creates amazing technology or item and it should be used positively for human.

>>He or she can create an amazing technology or item that can and should be used positively for humans.
Some famous people in the world did it already.

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They give and share a their technology to the weak.

>>They give and share their technology to the weak.
I makes a more beautiful world.

>>It makes a more beautiful world. 
I am a researcher, and I also want to be a engineer and researcher to help the human.

>>I am a researcher, and I also want to be an engineer and do more research to help humanity.
I think it\'s real superhero in the real world, not a science fiction novel.

>>I think it\'s a real superhero in the real world, not a science fiction novel.