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1. access
2. lastly
3. locate
4. journey
5. related to traveling
1. It\\\'s hard to make do without a smartphone these days. However, long access from it makes our health especially eyes and hands worse.
2. In order to buy ticket for movie using phone we should search proper time at first and then secondly, choose seats that we want to. Lastly, we make a reservation and then we will get an online ticket. We can show it to the staff in the entry of hall that screens our movie.
3. This cafe is located in the adequate place where the traffic is convenient.
4. I regret doing away with journey. Journey is an absolute tonic for my life.
5. These days many mobile app specialized in travel were made. They offer various informations related to traveling like how to locate places and what is tourist attractions, popular diners, sightseeing products and so on.
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1. access
2. lastly
3. locate
4. journey
5. related to traveling
1. It\\\'s hard to make do without a smartphone these days. However, long access from it makes our health especially eyes and hands worse.
>> It\'s hard to make do without a smartphone these days. However, long access to it makes our health, especially eyes and hands worse.
2. In order to buy ticket for movie using phone we should search proper time at first and then secondly, choose seats that we want to. Lastly, we make a reservation and then we will get an online ticket. We can show it to the staff in the entry of hall that screens our movie.
>> In order to buy a movie ticket using a phone, firstly, we should choose the time. Secondly, the seats that we want. Lastly, make a reservation and then we will get an online ticket. We can show it to the staff at the entrance of the movie hall.
3. This cafe is located in the adequate place where the traffic is convenient.
>> This cafe is located in a place where there\'s not much traffic.
4. I regret doing away with journey. Journey is an absolute tonic for my life.
>> I regret doing away with travelling as this is an absolute tonic of my life.
5. These days many mobile app specialized in travel were made. They offer various informations related to traveling like how to locate places and what is tourist attractions, popular diners, sightseeing products and so on.
>> These days many mobile apps specialized in travel were made. They offer various information related to travelling, like how to locate places, tourist attractions, popular diners, souvenirs, and so on.
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