8/29 writing homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in accomplishing your homework. Thank you for sharing your experience in Rome. I could just imagine how scared you were at that time, but despite the unwanted experience, you were still able to enjoy your tour! Fantastic! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

The place that I will never forget is Rome in Italy.

>> Correct
I have been Italy for my vacation trip after conference, when I was a master course student.

>>When I was taking up my Masters, I had the chance to go on a vacation in  Italy after a conference.
 When I arrived in Rome, it was already late at night.

>>Correct
I could not find my hotel, because everything is strange for me.

>>I could not find my hotel, because everything was strange to me. 
So, I took my smartphone out of my bag to use a map.

>>Correct
At the moment, two guys stole my phone.

>>Correct or

>>In an instant, two guys grabbed my phone.  
I was I fell on the road and screamed loudly.

>>I fell on the road and screamed loudly.
Finally, I could not find my smartphone.

>>Correct or

>>Unfortunately, I could not find my smartphone. 
However, I enjoyed the trip without phone.

>>However, I enjoyed the trip without my phone. 
I think it is remained just episode, But, I can not forget. hahaha....

>>It was unfortunate that it happened, but I think it was just a part of it, which I will never forget. ^ ^