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2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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Homework for the day: What qualities do you think are important in a friend? Explain your answer in not more than THREE (3) sentences. In my opinion, what is important among friends is the ability to feel sad and happy together. When is being happy or sad from something happens to friend, the real friend will become a happily or sadly person as much as the friend. Because of to sympathize and share a friend\'s joys and sorrows with and without any compensation, jealousy or evaluation is something only a true friend can do.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lyn! Your idea about this topic is amazing. You are indeed a good friend. =)

See you later! ~Teacher Elisha

In my opinion, what is important among friends is the ability to feel sad and happy together.

>> CORRECT!
When is being happy or sad from something happens to friend, the real friend will become a happily or sadly person as much as the friend.

>> When someone\'s friend is happy or sad, a real friend would feel as happy or as sad as much as his or her friend.
Because of to sympathize and share a friend\'s joys and sorrows with and without any compensation, jealousy or evaluation is something only a true friend can do.

>> Because to sympathize and to share a friend\'s joys and sorrows, with or without any compensation, jealousy or evaluation, is something only a true friend can do.

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