8. 3 Homework
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Essay Type:
An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What problems does this cause?
What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
The problem may be the poorer countries will lose a outstanding person who will make the country better. The most confirmative solution of this problem is of course to give much money and benefits to that kind of people.
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The problem may be the poorer countries will lose a outstanding person who will make the country better. The most confirmative solution of this problem is of course to give much money and benefits to that kind of people.
The problem is that the poorer countries will lose an outstanding person who may help the country\'s betterment. The most confirmative solution of this problem is of course to give much money and benefits to those kind of people.
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