8/31 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for your consistency in doing your homework. I appreciate it! I have to agree with you. Hawaii is actually a place where everyone can just relax and enjoy. You did good with your sentences, just don\'t forget your articles; \"a\" and \"the\" and also your verb tenses. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

If I can select I live, I want to live in Hawaii.

>> If I can choose where I would want to live, I would choose to live in Hawaii.
I have been there for honeymoon with my husband.

>>I have been there for a honeymoon with my husband.  
There were many tourists and the atmosphere is very comfortable and relaxed.

>>There were many tourists and the atmosphere was very comfortable and relaxed.  

You know, Korea is most hard working country in the world.

>>You know, Korea is the most hard working country in the world.  
I love my job and work for my dream, but sometimes I think it\'s not good way for life.

>>I love my job and I work for my dream, but sometimes I think it\'s not a good way of life. 
If I can live in Hawaii and I can surfing and just enjoy everyday, it also would be very exciting life.

>>If I can live in Hawaii, I can go surfing and just enjoy everyday, it would also be a very exciting life.